Billyman31's W.I.P thread!

**billyman31** · 08-27-2009, 07:56 AM

anything else before it gets 3-d and uploaded?

**billyman31** · 08-29-2009, 02:20 AM

REVIVE!!

so i'm going to completely remake the back, but what are your thoughts about the front??

**billyman31** · 08-29-2009, 04:56 AM

anyone?

**mario13** · 08-31-2009, 03:25 PM

not bad, make the chainsaw guy bigger but thats it

**Moogle** · 08-31-2009, 05:14 PM

The white outline on the characters is not working for me. I wish the characters were sharper and more upfront then getting lost in the effects.

**billyman31** · 09-04-2009, 08:32 AM

my box for the spypilot comp.
i wanted to go for a busy style on the front showing all of the different partners and the wacky characters of the game.
i'm going to go for a calmer style on the back but what do you think on the front?

**super-mega-hyper-sonic** · 09-04-2009, 10:15 AM

Looking Real nice!!!

The logo could use some work.The DS part.

**paper sonic** · 09-04-2009, 10:15 AM

Originally Posted by billyman31

my box for the spypilot comp.
i wanted to go for a busy style on the front showing all of the different partners and the wacky characters of the game.
i'm going to go for a calmer style on the back but what do you think on the front?

Not to fond of the logo but everything else is win

**billyman31** · 09-04-2009, 10:21 AM

well the idea was to recreate a N64 game for DS and you had to use that ds logo. it was originally silver but it looked boring so i recoloured it green. shall i go back to silver, keep it green or a different colour?

**paper sonic** · 09-04-2009, 10:23 AM

Originally Posted by billyman31

well the idea was to recreate a N64 game for DS and you had to use that ds logo. it was originally silver but it looked boring so i recoloured it green. shall i go back to silver, keep it green or a different colour?

it's to big and the 3d runes it
Paper Mario then you put a 3d logo on it

**billyman31** · 09-04-2009, 10:43 AM

Originally Posted by paper sonic

it's to big and the 3d runes it
Paper Mario then you put a 3d logo on it

i have to use THAT logo if it was 2d then it would be a completely different logo.
i have to use that one.

**VGMaster** · 09-04-2009, 11:10 AM

My suggestions:

1. gravity. I would put the 'grounded' characters (the ones that travel by foot) on the bottom tier next to Mario(ex. Bombette, Sushi, Gumbario). But in the case you don't do that, make sure the feet are not visible. Right now, Goombario, Bombette, and the Koopa bros look like they're floating. Easy fix though.

2. Parakary (that's his name right? The middle guy?) is not cut out well. Once again, easy fix. Actually, a couple of the characters aren't cut well...

Other than that, looks nice so far.

**Js2Kings** · 09-04-2009, 11:11 AM

Originally Posted by billyman31

i have to use THAT logo if it was 2d then it would be a completely different logo.
i have to use that one.

Then see if you could use the perspective tool to 2D the DS logo.

**billyman31** · 09-04-2009, 11:43 PM

ok i'll update this with all of your suggestions soon.

**afifan000** · 09-05-2009, 06:20 AM

Try VGMaster's suggestions, this could lead to become a great box.

**billyman31** · 09-06-2009, 09:12 AM

i've updated changing character placement, choppiness, the logo a bit and i've added a castle in the background. shall i keep it?

**afifan000** · 09-06-2009, 12:19 PM

Looking really nice, but you didn't really change too much.

**billyman31** · 09-06-2009, 11:32 PM

Originally Posted by afifan000

Looking really nice, but you didn't really change too much.

yeah i know, is the castle for keeps?

**stevencho** · 09-06-2009, 11:44 PM

Originally Posted by billyman31

yeah i know, is the castle for keeps?

Yeah, looks better with it.

**billyman31** · 09-07-2009, 03:37 AM

i've started on the back, look good so far?

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