Billyman31's W.I.P thread!

**billyman31** · 05-31-2009, 06:36 AM

well, i have decided to make my own W.I.P thread and here is my first box in it =]

**billyman31** · 05-31-2009, 10:26 AM

can i have some feedback please guys.

**Silent Oblivion** · 05-31-2009, 10:39 AM

Its looking pretty good so far!

I would change the font of the back text, and the tagline, also that black space needs to be filled.

**billyman31** · 05-31-2009, 10:43 AM

Originally Posted by Silent Oblivion

Its looking pretty good so far!

I would change the font of the back text, and the tagline, also that black space needs to be filled.

thank you, and the black space will be filled up.
also, what font do you think i could use?

**Silent Oblivion** · 05-31-2009, 10:44 AM

Try 'Calligula' for the tagline, and something simple, but also appealing for the main text.

**billyman31** · 05-31-2009, 09:59 PM

Originally Posted by Silent Oblivion

Try 'Calligula' for the tagline, and something simple, but also appealing for the main text.

thanks, i might try that.

**billyman31** · 06-01-2009, 09:42 AM

update.

view my first post to see it.

**billyman31** · 06-05-2009, 09:08 AM

any suggestions for improvement, also if anyone could give me a japanese age rating logo then that would be helpful.

**billyman31** · 06-06-2009, 03:38 AM

new box. Super mario Galaxy 2. credit to ADFD for template and LEGOslayer for mario and yoshi render on the front and ninty for the mario and yoshi render on the back.

**aC.Sleet** · 06-06-2009, 04:38 AM

Only flaw i can see is the edges on the back images. Clean those up and it's actually quite good! Nice job!

**Skyrunner** · 06-06-2009, 04:53 AM

Both the pokemon box and Galaxy box are pretty nice.

**billyman31** · 06-06-2009, 05:05 AM

Originally Posted by aC.Sleet

Only flaw i can see is the edges on the back images. Clean those up and it's actually quite good! Nice job!

i fixed that. it will be in the next update.

**billyman31** · 06-06-2009, 08:36 AM

is the galaxy box ready for posting?

**afifan000** · 06-06-2009, 09:28 AM

the pokemon box is pretty nice, but that Galaxy box just looks like the rest of them. Generic and boring. Try something different.

**RoarShark** · 06-06-2009, 09:32 AM

Originally Posted by billyman31

is the galaxy box ready for posting?

No I think you should wait until there is more art, thats my opinion though, because thee boxes are getting repetitive. OH and is Yoshi farting Stars?

**StarMario22** · 06-06-2009, 11:00 AM

Originally Posted by roarshark

no i think you should wait until there is more art, thats my opinion though, because thee boxes are getting repetitive. oh and is yoshi farting stars?

lmao!

**super-mega-hyper-sonic** · 06-06-2009, 11:18 AM

Originally Posted by RoarShark

No I think you should wait until there is more art, thats my opinion though, because thee boxes are getting repetitive. OH and is Yoshi farting Stars?

That is a new name for Olly

Super Yoshi Farts Stars!

=P

**axel_master** · 06-08-2009, 12:48 PM

Originally Posted by RoarShark

No I think you should wait until there is more art, thats my opinion though, because thee boxes are getting repetitive. OH and is Yoshi farting Stars?

I agree about the repetivness, and also they yoshi and farting/shitting stars has already been said

**afifan000** · 06-12-2009, 04:08 PM

The render editing wasn't bad, just too generic.

**billyman31** · 06-15-2009, 10:55 AM

here's my edit of Master Cheif and Samus.

who likes it and any suggestions for the box?

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