This is my first box. Please comment! I got the template from sockeymeow.
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UPDATE!
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Looks less choppy, "Get Popping!" is now "Get Poppin'!", "Razor Breath" is now "Super Breath". I typed in "www.esrb.org" because it was hard to read.
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Thread: Popping Bubble Wrap for DS
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05-03-2009, 01:22 PM #1
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Popping Bubble Wrap for DS
Last edited by AndrewRoks1998; 05-04-2009 at 01:35 PM.
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05-03-2009, 01:36 PM #2
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I don't know bubble wrap can be a little frisky at times.
Originally Posted by AndrewRoks1998
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05-03-2009, 02:15 PM #3
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A lot of it is choppy, so I would suggest fixing up some of that. Also, I would come up with a different name for "Razor Breath." It just doesn't feel like it would fit into the game style.
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05-03-2009, 03:00 PM #4
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Thank you for commenting. I'll fix it as soon possible. Fixed! Originally Posted by RunawayRed
Last edited by AndrewRoks1998; 05-04-2009 at 01:36 PM.
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05-03-2009, 03:09 PM #5
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05-03-2009, 03:28 PM #6
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Haha, I have a game like this on my phone :P
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