Halo mini (WIP)

[Lestat_the_vampire]

The entire box looks great, but do you ever wonder why were here?

If anyone here gets the reference, and can complete it, they win at life.

[stevencho]

Does anyone think that tagline font looks bad?

I personally do not like the shadow and the bold font.

[Geno]

Update. Does this tagline font look better? Also, box is due Tuesday, so I'd appreciate it if any major concerns/criticisms were brought forth now.

[MF29]

For the front, maybe you should use the usual, (battlefield, orange sunset in the background), picture. The back is going in the right direction, but it looks empty. However I have no ideas on how to fix that problem.

[Game_Master]

I like it, but halo mini is a horrible title.

[Geno]

For the front, maybe you should use the usual, (battlefield, orange sunset in the background), picture.

You mean like this, yes? Interesting idea, but I'm not a big fan.

The back is going in the right direction, but it looks empty. However I have no ideas on how to fix that problem.

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Thanks for the suggestion. I'll try and figure what exactly is so "empty" about it.

[MF29]

That front looks bit better in my opinion.

I think what I meant to say before is that the back looks plain, maybe you should scrap the back and re-do it in a different way. Try better text arrangement, are you adding screenshots?

[Game_Master]

That white part on the back would look better in black.

[Geno]

Updated. I think I'll go along MF29's idea for the front. Anyone else wanna suggest how I should fix the back?

[Geno]

Alright, major back restructuring. Sending in box tomorrow. Any other C&C?

[roza]

Does anyone think that tagline font looks bad?

Font is good but change the tagline to 'Take the fight into YOUR hands' and also continue the screens all across the page put put them infront the Elite on the left and behind the chief on the right to give a 3-d effect and make the synopsis seem more like a transmission like put it on a sort of board with 'Strt Transmission' at the beggining and 'End Transmission' at the end, but so far it's nice, i really like the temp too

[Geno]

and also continue the screens all across the page put put them infront the Elite on the left and behind the chief on the right to give a 3-d effect

Liek this?

[roza]

Liek this?

Yeah, just add one more on the left so it goes off screen, use a FMV Cut Scene withe the Cheif on it but yeah like that.

[nothing94]

Yeah, just add one more on the left so it goes off screen, use a FMV Cut Scene withe the Cheif on it but yeah like that.

Awesome, I'd fav it.

[Geno]

Yeah, just add one more on the left so it goes off screen, use a FMV Cut Scene withe the Cheif on it but yeah like that.

Updated. Anything else I should fix before I send it in?

[Syndrome]

Change the B&C settings for each section.. Make the backgrounds darker, corresponding with the theme.