Left 4 Dead Bundle WIP

**Spiderpig24** · 01-09-2009, 03:36 PM

I'm updating my Left 4 Dead box with a bundle box to go with it and this is what I have so far. Let me know what you think of it. The quality went down a lot when I uploaded it, I don't know how to upload in PNG. I saved it in PNG and when I uploaded it it changed to JPG.
Left 4 Dead Bundle Box PNG.jpg

**Drakxxx** · 01-09-2009, 04:09 PM

I'm loving that background. Looks super so far, I'll keep my eye on your progress.

**Spiderpig24** · 01-09-2009, 05:19 PM

Thanks Drakxxx, Here is an update to the front. The front is pretty much done unless antbody thinks that I need to change or add anything to it.
Left 4 Dead Bundle Box PNG.jpg

**gamerking** · 01-09-2009, 05:21 PM

really sorry man...but i'm not really liking this one.

**Spiderpig24** · 01-09-2009, 05:23 PM

Originally Posted by gamerking

really sorry man...but i'm not really liking this one.

Is it the quality you don't like or is it just the design as a whole?

**gamerking** · 01-09-2009, 06:32 PM

idk. it just doesn't seem to attract my attention. like if i saw that in the store, i'd be like..umm...okay. and then move on. lol. you should trying doing a couple images together instead of one image.

**Drakxxx** · 01-09-2009, 06:53 PM

maybe adding some character renders on either the left or right of the box would make it a little more lively. The background is great, but I agree with Joe that it might need something more.

**tleeart** · 01-09-2009, 06:59 PM

Originally Posted by gamerking

idk. it just doesn't seem to attract my attention. like if i saw that in the store, i'd be like..umm...okay. and then move on. lol. you should trying doing a couple images together instead of one image.

Actually, I disagree with that evaluation, personally. Nice image, don't make it what the box is about. That would be a great background. Now where I think you should go is bring down the images at the top of the box next to the Xbox 360 logo and bring it down and make it larger into the box design. Also, you'll probably want to find a shot of the console in 3 quarters view, so you can edit the console and make it look more interesting. So far it just looks like a red console. Perhaps the Left4Dead logo on the side, like as if it were spraypainted on with a stencil. I'm just thinking of the limited Halo 3 console that had all the intricate detail to it, how it had metallic accents and such.

I like it, but it needs work.

**Spiderpig24** · 01-10-2009, 04:07 PM

Thanks everybody for the critiques, I tried to change a few things on it to make it look better. I would have used character renders but I can't find any. Here is what I have so far for the front of the box, let me know what you think of it. I'm not done making the special edition console for it yet.
Left 4 Dead Bundle Box 2 PNG.jpg

**tleeart** · 01-10-2009, 04:33 PM

That's going more in the direction I imagined it looking, good work.

**Spiderpig24** · 01-10-2009, 05:32 PM

Thanks Tleeart, I just finished the special edition 360 to go on the front. The front is done now, unless anybody thinks I should change anything. I'm making the side for it now.
Left 4 Dead Bundle Box 3 PNG.jpg

**tleeart** · 01-10-2009, 06:18 PM

I really think that looks official now. Something you could imagine seeing at a store. Great work.

**mtirkmane** · 01-10-2009, 06:28 PM

It's very good, but it bothers me that its low in quality.

**TwistedTinkerToy** · 01-10-2009, 06:41 PM

Don't forget a Live logo.

**ELCrazy** · 01-10-2009, 06:46 PM

Originally Posted by mtirkmane

It's very good, but it bothers me that its low in quality.

I think it's because he uploaded it in a compressed JPG file.

**mtirkmane** · 01-10-2009, 07:37 PM

Originally Posted by ELCrazy

I think it's because he uploaded it in a compressed JPG file.

Oh, I overlooked that factor, well, in that case, it looks great.

**Drakxxx** · 01-10-2009, 08:02 PM

Looks great man.

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