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  1. 01-05-2009, 10:13 PM #1
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    Default my first box art :)

    this is my first ever box art, it's for wario and waluigi: partners in crime.


    tell me what you think of it (i know it's kinda bare xD, i just liked the style so went with it )
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    YoshiStar's logo looks stretched. The design is very clean, though I don't really feel great about the way their heads are split.
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    yea he's logo was small compared to the box's size (i think 0.0) and it was hard to match the length of waluigi's head and width of wario's, so i tried to match the center by putting their eyes on the same level
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    Welcome to VGBA!
    This is pretty good for a first: shiny and clean, no technical errors, semi-official-looking.. good job! I suggest, however, that you move Wario & Waluigi up so that the white space on the top left is filled (it's okay if Waluigi's head touches the Wii topbar) and you do something to that bare divider line... i dunno, make it a zig-zag or something? It's your call.
    Oh, and make a back also! Nobody here likes front-only submissions.
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    yea i don't like the blank areas either ill fix it up xD
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    i think you should get a glowing line in between the two pictures.
    and welcome to the site
    First box I've made in 2 years, check it out.
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  7. 01-05-2009, 11:52 PM #7
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    ok an thanks for the welcome
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