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Thread: First Box: Zelda: The Minish Cap [Erad]

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    Default First Box: Zelda: The Minish Cap [Erad]

    What do you think?



    Im going to make a back and im not sure if the front is done yet, just want some critiques

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    It's good so far, but it feels a bit empty. Maybe add some plants or other characters in the background? Also, there needs to be a shadow under Link, so that he looks like he's part of the image, and not just on top of it. Also, make the logo a bit bigger, move it closer to the middle of the top, and add a small white glow behind it. Also, make the ESRB logo a bit larger. Also, thanks for using my template, but please give credit when you post the box.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KoopaDasher View Post
    It's good so far, but it feels a bit empty. Maybe add some plants or other characters in the background? Also, there needs to be a shadow under Link, so that he looks like he's part of the image, and not just on top of it. Also, make the logo a bit bigger, move it closer to the middle of the top, and add a small white glow behind it. Also, make the ESRB logo a bit larger. Also, thanks for using my template, but please give credit when you post the box.
    I'll work on that, thanks
    And I will give credit.

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    I've taught you well.

    Listen to what Koopa said.

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    Nobody else?

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    It looks Very good.
    But I agree with koopa, It Feel's a bit empty

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    I would also have to agree with Koopa. It's a little too empty for my liking. I would suggest maybe adding a Minish somewhere on the front, or maybe Princess Zelda. Other than that, it's a pretty good first.
    Oh...Welcome to the site!

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    Awesome!
    Through i agree with koopa.

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    VERY GOOD for a first, but the template is sort of cut off.
    Touch it up a bit, and it will look great!

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