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Thread: Gears 2 WIP [Venom&RunawayRed]

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    Default Gears 2 WIP [Venom&RunawayRed]

    Alright we decided to do a collab and i started right away on my parts, what do you think?



    Photobucket made it a little blurry too so ignore it, i know its not great but i need some feedback please.

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    The logo seems too light. Make it more grungy, aswell as the box. It seems too light for Gears. I'd go with a reddish/darker orange color scheme. It just seems too bright.

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    Thanks for the feedback guys.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Venom1 View Post
    Thanks for the feedback guys.
    You're welcome

    Up the contrast, like, until forever. It's practically pink now

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadow the Hedgehog View Post
    You're welcome

    Up the contrast, like, until forever. It's practically pink now
    On what?

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    Ok, its very bright for gears two, but, its nice. the brightness needs to flow more, but whatever.

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    Fix it to the color theme of the official box, and add characters at the back (make sure it flows nicely, if not it won't look good).

    Can't wait to see what you guys have for V2

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    Alright so:
    -Make it darker
    -Add more characters in the back
    -Make sure it flows

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    Update:


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    much better than the original, but its still missing something- at the moment it looks like two renders of characters have just been stuck on top of a background. also maybee make the background slightly more dark

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    yeah looks really good love the colours

    p.s its gonna be hard to kill skorge
    i didnt want anyone to make a gears 2 box i'm too excited
    First box I've made in 2 years, check it out.

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    Hey guys, I started working on the back. Tell me what you think:

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    I love the back RR!! It really fits in with the front venom made... Awesome job both of you!!

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    yeah i really like the back the front is coming along well too. the bloody texture at the bottom of the screenshots you should carry that down to the bottom of the box.
    First box I've made in 2 years, check it out.

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    Alright I updated my part of the box:

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    Updated!


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    Now, I wanna do a collab with RR If his backs are that good.

    seriously guys, thats outstanding. doesn't look generic at all (No offense meant for any GOW2 boxes in the HOF).

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