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I would like critique on this please! Preferably on the page, instead of the thread.

http://www.vgboxart.com/view/43842/

Edit: updated my box

My first boxart, and first comp sub. Lots of cherry poppin go around here lol. Hope you like.

http://www.vgboxart.com/view/43842/

I edited my first entry so please just the updated link.

It looks like the black and red might be a problem blending in well with each other.

Well since it seems like you want it, you could increase the focal point on the cover to show off the main hero more. I actually didn't see the creatures until I looked at it a few times. It's like...

Well as it is now some places are really hard to read. I would suggest playing with it more, or duping the text and changing the color and placing it at angle like a shadow. But if you do that I...

Maybe I'm just a fan of originality, but I've seen those renders used in A LOT of people's sigs, boxes, etc. I think it would be nice to take a less than common render and make something nice from...

I actually like the text on the first one more... But I would say add a dark shadow to the text so that way it separates itself from the background and is more defined.

I am doing this btw. :)

I don't get what you are saying. I am talking about hyperlinking all of the contestants names with their art. Currently you have the name, critique, then score, with no show of the art

I know I'm just new to this site but I have a suggestion. Do you think you could hyperlink the names of the users with their art? I think it would make it easier to see exactly what you are giving...