Vividamage123's Shadow of the Colossus WIP

[vividamage123]

http://s2d2.turboimagehost.com/t/468756_Shadow_of_the_Colossus.png (http://www.turboimagehost.com/p/468756/Shadow_of_the_Colossus.png.html)

please critique

[qwerty334]

Loving the light FX. :D
The downside is that the contrast is way too high. The sky is pretty much fluorescent yellow, and the colossus is...... orange.

Keep this in mind whenever you change the contrast/saturation of an image: it should look natural.

Keep working on this, though! I can forsee this being your best box.

[MLN]

Nice! Can't wait to see the rest.

[Karma]

Yay! You listened to my advice! I agree with qwerty though, you need to adjust the hue and contrast of the colors until you get that perfect balance. Trust me---you'll know when you're satisfied with it. Other than that, excellent, keep it up!

[kirby22]

Yeah, agreed. The contrast is a little too much. But it's tight'a hell!!

[vividamage123]

http://s2d2.turboimagehost.com/t/469022_Shadow_of_the_Colossus.png (http://www.turboimagehost.com/p/469022/Shadow_of_the_Colossus.png.html)

OKay I updated please critique

[kirby22]

Looks great so far, keep going. ^)^

[vividamage123]

Okay almost finished product any final critique

http://s2d2.turboimagehost.com/t/469393_Shadow_of_the_Colossus.png (http://www.turboimagehost.com/p/469393/Shadow_of_the_Colossus.png.html)

[qwerty334]

Bring the saturation down.
A lot.

But it's looking good. ;)

[Ladykiller]

Looks nice right now, but not quite finished for me. The overall contrast is still WAY too high. As qwerty said, the lighting should look natural. Right now, the front looks like someone's shining an extremely bright light bulb on it, rather than the softer light of the sun.

Oh yeah, before you post, make sure you update the back game info too- memory card info, copyright text, and most importantly...take the squaresoft logo out.

[vividamage123]

Yup I fixed that already but can you guys come back in like 10 minutes to check the newer one

[vividamage123]

http://s2d2.turboimagehost.com/t/469460_Shadow_of_the_Colossus.png (http://www.turboimagehost.com/p/469460/Shadow_of_the_Colossus.png.html)

Better?

[numerobetically]

I think it looks great, although I'd add something more to the front background personally.

[dark_raider]

Looking Good...I agree Numero add some more to the front. Also, maybe you could add another screen and some more text.

(JUST MY OPINION::Trajan Pro is overused)