View Full Version : My box so far?
Lestat_the_vampire
06-14-2008, 03:25 PM
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk111/Hello4114_2008/ironman.png
It is a WIP, And I can't think of a back. Should I post it the way it is?
EggBoy13
06-14-2008, 04:16 PM
i suggest giving that jet a pupose for being there...
like maybe to chase a smaller ironman
Lestat_the_vampire
06-15-2008, 06:21 AM
i suggest giving that jet a pupose for being there...
like maybe to chase a smaller ironman
ok, any one else?
I think the main pic of Iron Man is good but the rest of the background just seems as if you put it there for no reason Like Eggboy 13 said. I would go back and change the background completely. Maybe put a distorted image of a desert wasteland in the back? Im not sure, but right now the background looks rather plain.
Dersnap
06-15-2008, 08:10 AM
The ESRB, SEGA and Marval logos are all touching the corner when they shouldn't be and they should all be a bit smaller. It's definately an improvement, though.
Ladykiller
06-15-2008, 08:40 AM
The ESRB, SEGA and Marval logos are all touching the corner when they shouldn't be and they should all be a bit smaller. It's definately an improvement, though.
What he said.
The 2 faded iron man renders, the airplane, and the sky background are really random for an iron man box. Put more red and yellow in there- it overall lacks coherency right now, so no...you shouldn't post it as is.
Backs are even harder, so try to master making fronts first before you move on.
Lestat_the_vampire
06-15-2008, 08:41 AM
The ESRB, SEGA and Marval logos are all touching the corner when they shouldn't be and they should all be a bit smaller. It's definately an improvement, though.
Thanks man. Coming from someone with experience like you, I'm touched, man.
Lestat_the_vampire
06-15-2008, 08:49 AM
What he said.
The 2 faded iron man renders, the airplane, and the sky background are really random for an iron man box. Put more red and yellow in there- it overall lacks coherency right now, so no...you shouldn't post it as is.
Backs are even harder, so try to master making fronts first before you move on.
ok.
thanks.
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