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Ayron
06-08-2008, 01:23 PM
Yeah,long time no WIP-- this is a pretty odd, yet simple objective i'm going for with this box. Yup---i used a standard gradient. sue me.

American flag is kinda represening freedom, as i believe that's what the game is trying to portray.

Here you go---- all critique/feedback/comments highly appreciated :D

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa224/ayr0n/burnout--pAAAcopy.png

oxol
06-08-2008, 01:27 PM
PAL and ESRB dont match.
good otherwise.

Ayron
06-08-2008, 01:28 PM
it's a wip--that kind of stuff will be changed in the latest part of the process.

Star89er
06-08-2008, 03:49 PM
Looks nice... There's some white around the tire tracks, is that supposed to be there?
Oh, and have you considered making the black near the bottom a little lighter? I think it might look a bit better like that... I dunno.

Kaiboy12
06-08-2008, 05:59 PM
The front of the bike looks like it is cut off a little (maybe it's just me) and the the colored part on the car and bike do not match the background. Otherwise, great. Cant wait fo the back.

Shadow the Hedgehog
06-08-2008, 06:06 PM
`/0 d00d! You rank 9 you cain't be usin these "standad gradients" and wat-not.




:p

Ayron
06-09-2008, 01:18 PM
update!!

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa224/ayr0n/burnout--pAAAcopy-1.jpg

TwistedTinkerToy
06-09-2008, 01:26 PM
The logo should be at the top.

Shadow the Hedgehog
06-09-2008, 02:20 PM
Looks cool, but kinda thrown together. I think you should tone down the grudging on the front a lil' though. But that logo thing you made's hella nice ;)

Ayron
06-10-2008, 02:35 PM
I'll move logo,and reduce grunge ^^--any other criticism?

TwistedTinkerToy
06-10-2008, 02:36 PM
...any other criticism?

Die

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Ayron
06-10-2008, 02:38 PM
Die

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I love you too... <.>

TwistedTinkerToy
06-10-2008, 02:38 PM
I love you too... <.>

Ok, sweetie, see you at dinner. *air kiss*

Dersnap
06-10-2008, 02:40 PM
Why do the cars on the tagline have Santa hats on?

http://www.myps3.com.au/img/game/Burnout--Paradise-5.jpg <- Use dat instead. >_>

Ayron
06-10-2008, 10:31 PM
Dersnap--- do you have ANY idea how low-res that is?

Dersnap
06-11-2008, 09:38 AM
Ayron--- do you have ANY idea how much I don't care?

^__^