Kingdom Hearts: Final Remanent

[khaosknight]

First off i'd like to intorduce myself my name is khaosknight and this is My First Boxart Ever I just want to know what people think and what I should work on I like advanced critiques to critisize.
This boxart is based on a ds homebrew game i'm working on.
http://i257.photobucket.com/albums/hh224/knight_rose/khaosknightskingdomheartshomebre-1.jpg
Thanks Again, khaosknight

[vgboxking]

First off i'd like to intorduce myself my name is khaosknight and this is My First Boxart Ever I just want to know what people think and what I should work on I like advanced critiques to critisize.
This boxart is based on a ds homebrew game i'm working on.
http://i257.photobucket.com/albums/hh224/knight_rose/khaosknightskingdomheartshomebre-1.jpg
Thanks Again, khaosknight


great... where is it?

[Star89er]

You just qouted it... Do you really not see it?

[vgboxking]

You just qouted it... Do you really not see it?

no...

[Vengeance]

give credit

[khaosknight]

so is it okay

[numerobetically]

Yes but do get rid of the computer graphic renders at the very bottom. They clash horribly with the others. Try sticking to one art style, and perhaps add a bit more, like a picture of Hollow Bastion or The World That Never Was as a background. Also, it'd be made by Nintendo and Square Enix. You need those developer logos. And the ESRB rating needs to be a tad bit bigger.

Good for a first. Will you be making a back?

[TheSlyder]

Just out of curiosity, where you trying to use the word "Remanent," a adjective form of the word "Remanence," which is the leftover magnetic charge that a magnet can leave behind, or where you going for the word "Remnant" which is just something that's leftover?

[khaosknight]

Yes but do get rid of the computer graphic renders at the very bottom. They clash horribly with the others. Try sticking to one art style, and perhaps add a bit more, like a picture of Hollow Bastion or The World That Never Was as a background. Also, it'd be made by Nintendo and Square Enix. You need those developer logos. And the ESRB rating needs to be a tad bit bigger.

Good for a first. Will you be making a back?
lol :D okay thanks yes i'm working on a back now (i can't put any screen shots yet because the game isn't finished so it may suck :p)

btw TheSlyder i ment what i said "Remanent" it has to do with the game and story itself that is soon to come (only half way done from makeing it so i don't want to spoil anything) you can find more details at http://www.fantasyflightgames.com/khforums/posts/list/1243.page

[khaosknight]

i know everything is kinda scrappy but i thought i'd post it so far
http://i257.photobucket.com/albums/hh224/knight_rose/khaosknightskingdomheartshomebre-1.jpg
http://i257.photobucket.com/albums/hh224/knight_rose/khaosknightskingdomheartshomebre-2.jpg
what i'm working on- logo's and esrb rateing, screen shots (may take a while again this is a game i'm in the progress of makeing for the ds so a little different from other boxart's but i will be makeing more after the game is finished), rikus image, blending in, and over all look and perfection hope that's it but again i'd like comments please-back
what i'm working on- esrb size, backround, logos, and over all look and perfection comment please-front