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Dersnap
03-15-2008, 07:20 AM
Alriht, well, this is my first box art here. I don't have the template because Techne's thread is having some problems so if anyone has the .psd file for Techne's PS3 template, please post it here so that I can add it. Or, better yet, if I could get DMShaposv's template, that'd also be great.
(I'm also going to be making a back.)
http://i31.tinypic.com/jj3cwi.png
Please tell me what you think and tell me what to fix, it's the only way I can improve.
MARKER
03-15-2008, 07:54 AM
Looks good so far, although it's hard to judge since it's just a image at the moment... especially as your image is in landscape, and the front of a PS3 box is in slight portrait... meaning you'll need to chop some sides off or add bits to top or bottom to slot into a PS3 template? because of that... questions are where you're gong to put the title logo, etc.
Copperhead
03-16-2008, 01:04 PM
It just looks like a wallpaper right now, but a cool wallpaper, none-the-less.
Dersnap
03-16-2008, 05:35 PM
So, here's the front. I'm not sure about the effect yet, I wanted to see what the community thought of it. I'm going to be starting on the back now.
http://i26.tinypic.com/23u4osn.png
The effect is unnecessary but nonetheless nice.
Dersnap
03-16-2008, 06:32 PM
The effect is unnecessary but nonetheless nice.
I couldn't agree with you more, I thought it was a bit strong.
GONZO!
http://i27.tinypic.com/69l2d0.png
Better?
Yeah it's better, I'm really fond of the artwork you chose.
Shadow the Hedgehog
03-16-2008, 06:40 PM
Amazing, I can't wait for the back :p
Dersnap
03-16-2008, 07:38 PM
Thanks for the support guys. The back is on the way and I just wanted to let you know that I moved it off of my template and onto Techne's PS3 template (I disliked my template).
Zebra
03-17-2008, 02:20 AM
I think it looks very good.
But well your decision :p.
The front looks AMAZING! Can't wait to see the back!
Dersnap
03-17-2008, 06:39 AM
Alright, here's version 4, the finished project!
http://i30.tinypic.com/veaiyv.png
TwistedTinkerToy
03-17-2008, 07:33 AM
I'm uber-jealous.
Cool, I still think it could do with some work. It must be a bit annoying how some things are cut off on the back, I suggest repositioning that and the two screenshots that are right next to each other look weird. With the presentation, it would be nice if you flipped the reflection horizontally and aligned it with box.
Dersnap
03-17-2008, 08:08 AM
Cool, I still think it could do with some work. It must be a bit annoying how some things are cut off on the back, I suggest repositioning that and the two screenshots that are right next to each other look weird. With the presentation, it would be nice if you flipped the reflection horizontally and aligned it with box.
So, what you're saying is that I should re-work the reflection and the screenshots? m'kay.
Zebra
03-17-2008, 08:28 AM
Well to be honest the back doesn't really fit the front IMO :o.
But other than that it looks very good!
Dersnap
03-17-2008, 09:20 AM
Alright guys, how is this?
http://i28.tinypic.com/nl1j6q.png
I re-worked the reflection, screenshots and made a few other changes to the back.
Saint
03-17-2008, 01:43 PM
'Tis very noice, but you also need to recolor the back to match the front, they clash too much.
Ladykiller
03-17-2008, 07:47 PM
Hmmm...definitely good. Very cool style to it. ;)
A quick suggestion would be to change the font style to make it suit the game better - Copperplate Gothic is a nice font, but not the best choice for this game. The back reflection could also be closer to the back.
Saint
03-17-2008, 07:49 PM
God, is LK like master of fonts or something? I've seen you recognize fonts from Copperplate Gothic, to Comic Sans, To Base 02, to even the ellusive Verdana, when everybody else thought it was like arial or something similar.
Ladykiller
03-17-2008, 07:50 PM
Not to mention the uber awesome Papyrus font. teehee :D
But, yeah...font choice IS a very important part of the box. Actually the most important factor around here, considering even higher level artists could spend more time deciding a good matching font choice.
Saint
03-17-2008, 07:51 PM
EXACTLY!
(10 gheyz limit)
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