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treesquirrel12
09-29-2006, 05:40 PM
i made this box cause i have nothing to do except wait for my bro to get off the 360 so i can screw around with my new camera. i hope you like it so far.

E_G
09-29-2006, 05:45 PM
The black frame on the mature logo is uneven as a tiny thing, everything is perfect cept that, nice improvement, remember to get the text to stand out though when you do it, use a colour brush underneath the text with a 45% opacity, summary text has been your weakness so far.

treesquirrel12
09-29-2006, 05:51 PM
ill try to fix that but im not sure cause i use the doublesided temp that lodo posted in the simple needs thread. but thx, if theres one thing i've learned in life its practice makes perfect i learned that with yo-yos and boxart making.

treesquirrel12
09-29-2006, 06:37 PM
update :D
i think it looks great and will be my final version.

E_G
09-29-2006, 07:07 PM
You need screenshots, the text is too big, Silicon Knights games always have posh and smallish text.

Radioactive Bob
09-29-2006, 07:22 PM
and you need to give the text some drop-shadows, it's hard to read a places.

Ratchetcomand
09-29-2006, 07:28 PM
Petty good , i think the text can be better and i doubt the game is going to be M .

treesquirrel12
09-29-2006, 08:42 PM
ill fix these tomorrow ok but thx for the comments anyway.

treesquirrel12
09-30-2006, 02:08 PM
version deux :D

Ratchetcomand
09-30-2006, 02:24 PM
A lot better . Doubt the game will be M though.

treesquirrel12
09-30-2006, 05:39 PM
well its either M or RP. anyway im gonna post now.