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treesquirrel12
09-24-2006, 04:57 PM
this is the story on my box META i did for school. just wondering what everyone thinks of it. enjoy :D

By: Steven P.
META
The Year is 2035 on the planet Earth. I am the only living thing close to being human. The world has been affected by a chemical which mutates all life forms. My name is Frank Williams, I'm not normal, I'm not a mutant, I am the META.
Change. It's a funny thing but right now everything on Earth is experienceing it, and I have to stop it. I know theres an antidote to this chemical because I helped design it, I just don't know where it is. It was a simple project, we designed this chemical to do many things, ressurect dinosaurs, help us survive in interplanetary travel, and much more. But the chemical leaked and we ended up paying for it. It mutated us all into monsters. Except me, I only was half mutated. I could then fly, I was very strong and I also grew giant claws. I was sneaking around a lab in Maine when I was attacked by something that resembled a gorilla. It was twice the size of a regular one its teeth were like razors and it had an extra row ,just as sharp, behind the first row. I hopped over the creature and slashed at its back but it wasn't there. Next thing I knew I was on the ground with the monstrosity beating on my wings. Using my strength I pushed him off and kicked him away the kick pretty much knocked him unconscious.
When I couldn't find anything
I moved on.
I searched through 7 more labratories before I found a lead, unfortunately it lead too the Congo in Africa. I found a still operating boat and used that to travel the treacherous Atlantic Ocean. This time I faced a mutated blue whale which seemed the size of and island. I first agitated it by trying to land on its back which I mistook for an island. When it roared and I swear it would have rated a 15.0 on the richter scale. I hopped back in the boat, spread my wings and paddled as hard as I could but that did'n't stop the whale or its house sized shark friends. I eventually reached Africa. I was travelling to the Congo when I saw many eyes pop out of the dense brush. But thankfully they watched and didn't spring. When I reached the Congo I wasn't relieved as much as you i think I would be. The natives there looked normal but were cannabalistic, and twice as swift and stealthy as usual. I was shot at with at least 500 darts. but the mutation must have messed with there eyes. When I reached Lake Tele I encountered somthing big.... VERY big!
I stood before the hidden animal, Mokèlé-mbèmbé, which is still unconfirmed as a real animal. Supposedly the size of an elephant it is rarely seen. I would have been so excited to see it if it wasn't ready to swallow me whole. I tried hurting it but nothing affected it. So I did the one thing I was best at, running away. I flew for 3 miles before I lost it. When I got to the lab it was destroyed but the antidote was there unharmed. My guess is that the chemical gave eveything a mind different from the original animal. My mission was complete.
The moment I released the antidote into the air I immediately felt better. When all was normal I had to explain why there was billions of damage caused around the Earth. But 20 years later in 2055 I am revered as a hero to all, my story is written in a number of books about the META who saved the Earth.
I am now normal, I wasn't a mutant, I was the META.

THE END

I no its a bit long but I worked hard on it and wanted to know what everyone thinks.

Ratchetcomand
09-24-2006, 05:46 PM
Cool story , i enjoy reading it ! I will buy it if it was real .

4.5/5

treesquirrel12
09-24-2006, 06:02 PM
thx rachet :) if you look up the mokele-mbembe on the internet you will get a bunch of results on dinosaurs. im in to the big foot and loch ness monster stuff. otherwise known as cryptozoology.

E_G
09-24-2006, 06:19 PM
How random :rolleyes:
Good for you if you get a good grade.

treesquirrel12
09-24-2006, 06:28 PM
How random :rolleyes:
Good for you if you get a good grade.
yeah well im a random kinda guy :p

Radioactive Bob
09-24-2006, 07:20 PM
yeah well im a random kinda guy :p
pft, do you yell "TARDER SAUCE!" in the middle of class, yeah, well me neither:rolleyes:
anyways, the story is pretty unique and will most likely get a good grade ;)

treesquirrel12
09-25-2006, 04:42 AM
[QUOTE=Radioactive Bob]pft, do you yell "TARDER SAUCE!" in the middle of class[QUOTE]
NO!!..........
maybe :(
jk thx mikey.
PS: Mikey you think we should post Omega up here?????

stevenson
09-27-2006, 06:50 PM
Mikey, you spell it "tartar sauce." sweet story steven! I read it straight from the paper he printed... I'm Special.