FFVersusXIII WIP (wickedgamer)

[WickedGamer1]

Im working on a back cover for my Versus XIII box, and i'd like your imput on how it looks so far, and also, help on what the heck i should write on the back!
theres so little info on it (only till TGS:D)and its hard to get a description that sounds good. i mean, look at what i have on there now!
also, i will remove the M rating on the back

http://img422.imageshack.us/img422/8913/ffvxiiisx1.th.jpg (http://img422.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ffvxiiisx1.jpg)

(P.S. the description is a joke.)

[Gunslinger]

Looks very good. I think you should reduce the amount of leading (space between each sentence) in the description though.

As far as what to write: "A mysterious young man with dark blue hair and crimson eyes, he is the last heir to a dynasty ruling the only remaining city in the world to control crystals. He fiercly protects his home from marauders that would conquer it and take the crystals as their own."

[WickedGamer1]

Looks very good. I think you should reduce the amount of leading (space between each sentence) in the description though.

As far as what to write: "A mysterious young man with dark blue hair and crimson eyes, he is the last heir to a dynasty ruling the only remaining city in the world to control crystals. He fiercly protects his home from marauders that would conquer it and take the crystals as their own."
wow, thanks man!
that sounds great! i'll be sure to give creds where due :)

[WickedGamer1]

i have a question: would it honestly piss everyone off if i posted it as a new box?
im asking becuase i've done it before and the first few comments were asking me why i didn't just update my old one.

[Reed]

Looking great! A couple things though;

-The fade of the blue haired guy on the back looks a bit weird. It's too obvious that his head is getting chopped off. Maybe try a longer fade.
- The FF logo w/ the standard white photoshop glow doesn't come off well, especially against dark backgrounds. I would stay away from that in general, because it's overused and makes stuff look cheap. I would suggest a hard dropshadow that's bright blue (kind of like it already has) or white. That will keep the logo looking clean, while still separating it from the background.
-This is not specific to this box, but to your template (which has been kind of bothering me ever since you changed it ;) ). The dropshadow of PlayStation 3 at the top is a little bright and distracting (at least on an LCD). The opacity on that could drop by a good 25-50%. Other than that, I think it kicks ass.


i have a question: would it honestly piss everyone off if i posted it as a new box?
im asking becuase i've done it before and the first few comments were asking me why i didn't just update my old one.
Well, it's exactly the same as your old one but with a back added. Right? So looks like an update to me, as opposed to a new box.

[WickedGamer1]

thanks reed! tough critic i see ;) thats cool though. it definately helps. i'll try and fix that stuff you pointed out, so you be sure to tell me if it looks any better k? :)