Left 4 Dead

[ebchuck]

Hey there!

This is my first box. It took the whole morning to finish it. I really like it ;). But I still thinking that something could be better, in the front, I think that's something missing, some extra details on the fonts or a different collor. And in the back, I think that the text on the side of the screenshots could be in a different font. I tried a few, but this one fit better.

Any thoughts?

PS.: I apologize for any english grammar/spelling mistake and if you find one in the box, let me know about it!

http://i.imgur.com/KqDU9.jpg

[ebchuck]

Come on, please give some opinion, it's my first box.

[Deividas]

The back screenshots are far too big. The words are also far too big. For a first box try to do this, add smaller screenshots, add a description about the game, then maybe some features or reviews of the game. But everything right now is just way too big on the back. The front is not bad actually. Do that and then hopefully myself or others will find more changes

[ebchuck]

Hey Deividas, thank you very much for the tip, yesterday I couldn't work on the image. But today, I redesigned it. And it's looking better. I would apreciatte some thoughts about it.

http://i.imgur.com/uXdbL.jpg

[Deividas]

Good job, looks much better. Now for the description text, try to stay away from using fancy fonts because it will not look as professional most of the time, not in all cases of course, but most. So try to use something like Myriad Pro, which is a popular font for description, at least thats what I like to use. And it would look better if you added some yellow to the back like you have on the front. Maybe change the text underneath of the screens or even the tagline onto to that deep yellow you have on the front. Whichever looks better or even both.

[ebchuck]

Deividas, your tips helped me a lot.
I thought that a change in the front cover would be much better than change the colors on the back. My problem is the colors.

I do not deal well with them yet. The back is grey/black/red and then has the images, which are colorful. I tried the same in the front. I still think something’s missing. I just don't know what to do anymore =P. Well, it's my first...I have a lot to learn. I will send it today. But any thoughts about the new one are welcome. This forum is awesome ;). Here it is:

http://i.imgur.com/zq0ZH.jpg

[twoxT]

Aweseome, just center the text on the back and add borders to the screenshots.