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waterlordo
07-18-2011, 03:45 PM
Another Fully Custom Box of mine , Actually a Sequel to my other (1st) fully custom box: Color Kingdom! Well , Here it is :D

http://i661.photobucket.com/albums/uu335/waterlordo/CK2Project234.png

Please tell me What you Think ;)
waterlordo
07-18-2011, 04:16 PM
I Hate how no one ever replies to my WiP's -_-
Daemon
07-18-2011, 04:19 PM
I think it looks good!
RoarShark
07-18-2011, 04:20 PM
I Hate how no one ever replies to my WiP's -_-

Give it more time than 30 minutes. Give it atleast a day or two before you say no one is replying. As for the box, I think it looks ok. You could probably find a better font, because right now I think it is terrible. Really that is all that stands out as issues.
waterlordo
07-18-2011, 04:28 PM
Give it more time than 30 minutes. Give it atleast a day or two before you say no one is replying. As for the box, I think it looks ok. You could probably find a better font, because right now I think it is terrible. Really that is all that stands out as issues.

Which Font : The one on the front, the back, or the back description ?
Icyfirefists
07-19-2011, 05:20 AM
i think he means the text EVERYWHERE. its really hard to read the logo and the text on the back is just impossible to see. then if you wanna make a beard for sir greenfield, use one of the special brushes that photoshop gives you so that you don't have a half 2D,CG character. you can always change up the logo for a sequel so it can be read better. Most games do that. just don't do it too much. We won't mind if you change it.
waterlordo
07-27-2011, 07:26 PM
UPDATE TIIIIMMMEEEE!!!! Loll , I haven't been here for awhile due to me moving and such. But now I have everything back in order and I decided to continue to work on my Latest Project, SO HERE IT IS :D

http://i661.photobucket.com/albums/uu335/waterlordo/CK2Project10.png

Enjoy , and PLEASE Tell me What you Think ! ;D
RoarShark
07-27-2011, 07:30 PM
Try going with a fancy Arial like font for the front. The text is just way way to busy. Back looks great though.
waterlordo
07-27-2011, 07:37 PM
Try going with a fancy Arial like font for the front. The text is just way way to busy. Back looks great though.

What do you mean Fancy? You mean calligraphy or something ? Loll xD
waterlordo
07-27-2011, 09:27 PM
Do you guys think I should Post it how it is or work on it some more (but what on?!) ? O_O
twoxT
07-28-2011, 04:55 AM
The font on the front doesn't seem to fit in with the back. Maybe you could try a sans-serif font for it.