ZombieDeadpool8's Batman Arkham City WIP

[ZombieDeadpool8]

Hi, itsa ME!! I know my last box was 5 or so months ago, so I thought, hey, what the hell, here's my Batman Arkham City WIP. ENJOY!
C&C appreciated

http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/7162/arkhamcitywip1.png (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/856/arkhamcitywip1.png/)

[Hatty]

Its choppy, the colors don't flow, and it's very poorly blended.

[Hackmaster6000]

a little bit of choppyness here and there and also the green does not go with the
gray and black try another color. Other than that it looks great.