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The90sKid
02-28-2011, 01:54 PM
It's not near finished, I just wanted you guys' opinions so far:
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/1469/pmb.png
Mariolee
02-28-2011, 05:43 PM
Wow, this looks really good. Only quip so far is that it's empty, and Luigi's L is backward. Also, make it E for Everyone. :p
tmrd
02-28-2011, 11:07 PM
My main problem with it is that the proportions confuse me. I mean, the piranha plant is huge compared to the tree, and the blocks are too big for the plant.
Jordan94jb
03-01-2011, 12:25 AM
It takes a simple arrangement and it works here. Although it does seem like the subjects were just thrown in. Maybe make them integrate with the background more.
stevencho
03-03-2011, 09:25 AM
the thing i don't get is why peach looks as if she's floating mid air

Because she is floating mid air...
Spiner_
03-03-2011, 09:27 AM
Because she is floating mid air...

lol

The box is good, I guess, but it's pretty generic.
The90sKid
03-03-2011, 09:30 AM
Still working on this, it looks a lot different now.
I'll post an update soon.