View Full Version : Heavy Rain WiP by MattStar
MattStar
02-16-2011, 02:57 AM
Hey what do you guys think so far?
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2846/caseo.png
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2846/caseo.png
Sentroavium
02-16-2011, 04:30 AM
Good, try to find a more creative way to place the screenshots.
Spiner_
02-16-2011, 04:49 AM
Looks good! Altough I agree with Sentroavium about the screenshots. The hole back design is pretty boring right now.
Can't wait to see more of this!
MattStar
02-16-2011, 07:22 AM
Thanks guys, I definitely will rearrange the back, I wanted a clean feel but it doesn't look right as is. I guess I play around until something awesome comes along.
deiviuxs
02-16-2011, 08:31 AM
I like the front but dislike the back.
Sentroavium
02-16-2011, 08:50 AM
I like the front but dislike the back.
This is really not helping.
MattStar
02-16-2011, 10:07 AM
I like the front but dislike the back.
I know, it's extremely unfinished and will probably be scrapped. I have an idea for a better design on the back, so I'll start on that.
MattStar
02-16-2011, 07:13 PM
I'm lost on the back... anyone have advice?
MattStar
02-16-2011, 10:13 PM
Little update. Is it looking better?
http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9688/case2.png
http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9688/case2.png
Little update. Is it looking better?
I think that the second darker one looks better, but the back seems a bit empty to me. Maybe put an origami figure behind the text or something? Also, I love how you did the rain drop effect on the front. It really matches the game!;)
Now back to my FF XIII-2 box.
vanillacokenz
02-17-2011, 12:37 AM
I really love what you have done with the 'thoughts' around Ethan on the front. Fantastic!
The screenshots look much better on the back now. Just need to work on the placement of the text on the back as under the screenshots looks quite empty (as said above).
Maybe move the text up to the bottom of the screenshots then add another line of screenshots?
Don't forget the blue Move compatible strip on the front top (unless you aren't adding that because it says "move edition"). ;-)
Spiner_
02-17-2011, 12:47 AM
Would be really awesome if you could make the screenshots to a "circle" that goes around Madison (the woman). Do you get what I mean?
Edit: Imagine the blue squares as different screenshots. Maybe you will have grunge them up in the edges. Maybe this won't work at all, but I think it's worth a try... :P
http://data.fuskbugg.se/skalman02/mattstar.png
MattStar
02-17-2011, 07:55 AM
Thanks Spiner, I'll try that.
And thanks FMD and Vanilla, just saying, I planned on adding more to the back, that why its a WiP haha.
MattStar
02-17-2011, 08:26 AM
Hey I'm just plain old failing on that screen idea. No way I place them looks right. Maybe you could use that on a future project of yours Spiner...
Spiner_
02-17-2011, 09:07 AM
Hey I'm just plain old failing on that screen idea. No way I place them looks right. Maybe you could use that on a future project of yours Spiner...
Okey... I don't really know how I could help you, but try to paint some kind of circle, and it might be easier to place them out. (check my picture)
You don't have to do it if you don't want, though :P
http://data.fuskbugg.se/skalman02/_mattstar.png
MattStar
02-17-2011, 04:05 PM
Ok looks done to me, what do you think?
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9688/case2.png
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9688/case2.png
Ok looks done to me, what do you think?
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9688/case2.png
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9688/case2.png
Yep, I'd say it is. Guaranteed Fav from me. :D
spypilot
02-17-2011, 04:15 PM
sexy. but i do not like the move edition text beneath the logo
just call it heavy rain
MattStar
02-17-2011, 04:19 PM
sexy. but i do not like the move edition text beneath the logo
just call it heavy rain
There actually is a move edition... see
http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51J73rbgLnL._SL500_AA300_.jpg
Adhiboy
02-17-2011, 05:00 PM
I have to agree with Spypilot. The Move Edition part looks kinda tacky. Love the box, btw.
MattStar
02-17-2011, 06:04 PM
You guys sure I should leave out the move edition?
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/1577/case3.png
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/1577/case3.png
MattStar
02-18-2011, 03:04 AM
Anyone?
Spiner_
02-18-2011, 03:17 AM
Yeah, it looks better in my opinion.
vanillacokenz
02-18-2011, 08:33 PM
Wow! It looks fantastic! You did a great job with this and it doesn't even feature a single origami figure :-D
I have seen the 'Move Edition' in shops so it doesn't bother me.
Ohh I just read the text on the back. Are you going to design a poster and CD to go along with your design? I wish I could get your edition ;-)
MattStar
02-19-2011, 05:29 PM
Wow! It looks fantastic! You did a great job with this and it doesn't even feature a single origami figure :-D
I have seen the 'Move Edition' in shops so it doesn't bother me.
Ohh I just read the text on the back. Are you going to design a poster and CD to go along with your design? I wish I could get your edition ;-)
Thanks, I might upload a poster and Soundtrack CD, as an update. I really wanted to try that, but anyway I've uploaded it. But yeah I will probably make the update.
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