Dead Rising 2

[Terminator]

Hi Guys Im New Could You Give Me A Hand Please On What I Could Improve? Thanks! :)10712

[Daemon]

Oh my god, WHY DO SO MANY PEOPLE CAPITALIZE EVERY WORD?????

This needs some work. The back text is TOO MUCH and is unreadable. Fix that, and add some screens.

[Terminator]

Thanks Daemon what colours would go well on the american flag?

[Daemon]

Thanks Daemon what colours would go well on the american flag?

Take off the American flag. It doesn't really have anything to do with Dead Rising as far as I know.

[Terminator]

And replace it with what?

[CoH GHOST 007]

Terminator!!! , hey thanks for showing me this earlier, but as Daemon said, add a few screenshots to the left or right side and do somthing about the text. Plus I am finally replacing MS Paint with Paint.Net. :)

[Daemon]

And replace it with what?

I don't know.

[CoH GHOST 007]

And replace it with what?
A dark image, but one that has somthing to do with this, search Google images :)

[Terminator]

Okay, CoH like zombies attacking chcuk?

[CoH GHOST 007]

Okay, CoH like zombies attacking chcuk?
I guess so, if it's too light though, darken it :)

[Terminator]

New and improved copy!10713

Is that better?

*EDIT Darkened it abit now so what do you think now?Also a comparisan of all three edited versions 107131071410715 so which one's best to upload into my boxes?

[CoH GHOST 007]

the one by itself

[amad2]

Alot of things can be improved.
-Use the resources part of the forums or main site to get your logos.
-Dont stretch the screenshots.
-Use some borders around the screenshots.
-Arrange everything on the back properly.
-Use a different font, that font makes a noob look like a noob.
-Dont just slap a template onto a wallpaper, use renders and effects to make a good front.
-What program are you using?

Use these suggestions to your advantage young box artist, you still have alot to learn.

[Terminator]

Im using paint.NET And how can i arrange the back properly and also what font and how on earth do i do renders also do you think it is good for a first attempt?

[Terminator]

CoH,there are two by themselves bottom or the top one?

[amad2]

Look on Dafont.com for good fonts just search throught the pages, you never know you may find one perfect for this game.
You dont "do" renders, renders are characters or objects or logos without backgrounds.
Look in the resource section of the main site and the forums and you will find some.
And goto planetrenders.com, they have a huge collection of renders. Just make an account and search for what you want.
And I think its alright for a first attempt, certainly better than my first attempt. That alright could be changed into a good or even a great if you use the suggestions that people suggest.

[CoH GHOST 007]

top one, but if you want good interest in your bopx, then do as amad2 says, or attempt it :)

[Terminator]

LOL CoH,thanks for the tips everyone i shall retry tommorow! :)

[CoH GHOST 007]

k, if you do any more print and bring in tommorow :)

[Terminator]

Will do!! :)