First box (haze)

[FlashFlood]

What do you think?

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edit: posted- http://vgboxart.com/view/37134/haze/?replies=0

[Spiderpig24]

This is pretty good. One thing I would do is change the black background to black, I think that would look better. And maybe try to make the font on the back the same design as the logo. I like the design you're going for with this.

[FlashFlood]

Update: Added Gradient
Changed Background

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[Spiner_]

Looks nice.
I think you should remove the red hand on the back though.

[FlashFlood]

Looks nice.
I think you should remove the red hand on the back though.

It was kind of a last minute thing, and it's not very high quality, so that sounds good.

Thanks for all the help everybody!

[FlashFlood]

Update: Removed Hand

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[Spiner_]

Oh, forgot to say, maybe use a more serious font for the back.

[FlashFlood]

Update: Better Back Font

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[Spiderpig24]

This is looking a lot better. This may or may not be a good idea, but maybe try moving the back tagline to the middle and adding shapes to the top corner of the back like you did with the bottom. Kinda like this: http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/3043/hazema.png

[rpgfreak]

FlashFlood=FlashFumo?

The box is pretty nice though.

[FlashFlood]

Update: Changed a lot on the back

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[FlashFlood]

FlashFlood=FlashFumo?

The box is pretty nice though.

Who's flashfumo?

Anyway, I really like how this is turning out, thanks for all the help and support!

[Spiderpig24]

I like that a lot. Are you planning on adding a description or screenshots to the back?

[Ayron]

Typography is very .... apparently visible, but it might not be a bad thing.

I hope you'll incorporate some neat details,because this looks like a really good foundation for a ditto boxart.

[FlashFlood]

Typography is very .... apparently visible, but it might not be a bad thing.

I hope you'll incorporate some neat details,because this looks like a really good foundation for a ditto boxart.

1. I don't know what you mean by the type being "apparently visable"
2. What's a ditto box?
3. What else should I include?

[Ayron]

1. I don't know what you mean by the type being "apparently visable"
2. What's a ditto box?
3. What else should I include?

1- Yeah,my apologies for the vocabulary difficulties here.. Second language.
Anyway,I meant to say that it was very obvious in the design.
2- ditto,the same... a very good foundation for a very good box.
3- I have no idea..surprise me.

Good luck!

[thecodemaster]

If I'm honest, I'm not a big fan of the gradient on the back cover - I'd have it all yellow. Obviously, that's just my opinion, whatever floats your boat.

I can't really decide on the positioning of "The Future Is Ours" so I won't comment on that, but my suggestion for your screenshots is to put them inside the hexagons - not all in one row, dot them around (4 maximum) but make sure you leave at least a medium-thick border (yellow) around them.

TCM

[Adhiboy]

I really like it so far. Maybe this should be a slip cover instead of an actual box?

[FlashFlood]

Update: Fleshed out the back

At TCM, i was working on this and after i finished progress, i checked this thread. I was your comment and laughed because what is below this is what i made before seeing your post and was almost exactly what you said!

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/4594/hazeboxv4.png

[Spiderpig24]

I like what you did with the screenshots and text. Everything's looking spot on so far, but the top of the back seems a little empty.

[FlashFlood]

is the solution more hexagons? :confused:

[Spiderpig24]

Try gray outlines of hexagons like on the front.

[FlashFlood]

Update: you can see whats new

I think i finally have it. I can just feel it about this one~ Do you agree?

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/9572/hazefinal.png

[Spiderpig24]

I like the top of the back very much, but I think the bottom looked better with the yellow boxes. Other than that, I think this looks finished.

[FlashFlood]

POSTED!!!

Here's the link

http://vgboxart.com/view/37134/haze/?replies=0