NSMBW Wip Ayron!

[Ayron]

Hello everyone,

I tried my hand at this mario box, and i kinda gave up on it.
However,Sven told me to continue it..so i did.
I would very much appreciate your comments and feedback/criticism :D


http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa224/ayr0n/smbw-2.png

[TrevOwnz]

The back needs to have the screen shots involved into the back in a different and more creative way. The front is cool but I feel the yellow isn't working.

Try decreasing the drop shadow a little on the back text. The top line on the back should have a shadow around the top like the logo if your going to copy the style.

Usually you should try and keep everyone the same size. Mario looks like a huge person on the back.

[Ayron]

update--still have to change mario and top catchphrase though.


http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa224/ayr0n/smbw-3.png

[Bastien]

update--still have to change mario and top catchphrase though.




Very cool. Though I would change the color of the tagline to make it stand out from the background.

[Geno]

You need to flip the "L" on Luigi's cap.

Also, I would consider switching the lakitu and Toad. I know the lakitu is supposed to be in the sky and such, but it looks awkward there, and Toad looks really disproportionate.

Other than that, it looks nice so far. Yellow is a great color, as it stands out quite a bit.

[Sven]

Haha, I love those Chain Chomp screenshots!!

Anyway, I agree with Bastien and Geno.