Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days

[TwistRox]

Hey guys this is my entry for the Beginner Comp:
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5933/presentationg.png
Tell me what you think about it
PS: I will start the back later
Edit: The theme for the comp was to use those glass shards

[Delicious1]

Are you allowed to play with that glass any more? Right now they look so photorealistic they really clash with the rest of the cartoony box. If you're allowed to edit them to look more cartoonish try that so they match everything else a little better.

[TwistRox]

Are you allowed to play with that glass any more? Right now they look so photorealistic they really clash with the rest of the cartoony box. If you're allowed to edit them to look more cartoonish try that so they match everything else a little better.
What you would suggest doing with them ive tried some stuff to try and make it look cartoony but its not working
Version 2:
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/9821/presentationd.png
Your comments are always welcomed!

[TwistRox]

Version 3:
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/8266/presentation.png
Not much added but changed the font and gave everyone a shadow
Your comments are always welcomed

[spypilot]

no, keep the back like V1 and use black text in the white space

[TwistRox]

Version 4:
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/8266/presentation.png
Added a different background for the back and gave it an orange overlay, added the "Wireless DS Multi - Card Play" on the back and made the screenshots lower
Your comments are always welcomed:)

[Brettska99]

I dont understand your use of glass. I mean sure, theres shards of glass, but where did they come from? I see now broken/cracked mirror, window, or any other type of glass anywhere. What im saying is that the random glass makes no sense and doesnt flow with anything

[Sven]

I agree with Brett, the glass looks out of place. Everything else looks pretty boring and uninspired.

[TwistRox]

I dont understand your use of glass. I mean sure, theres shards of glass, but where did they come from? I see now broken/cracked mirror, window, or any other type of glass anywhere. What im saying is that the random glass makes no sense and doesnt flow with anything


I agree with Brett, the glass looks out of place. Everything else looks pretty boring and uninspired.
Ive now decided that this is not going to be my entry for the comp

[slimd1995]

Change the hue of the shards to match the background better.