Mario Super Sluggers

[ojoe2000]

Before you comment please read this,
This is not a satire box I just needed something to put their until I find the real plot, also I'm gonna get rid of the epic fail logo to I'm saving it for another box.

Also I cant find any good quality images to use for the background if anyone finds or has any please submit them in this thread. :)

http://i401.photobucket.com/albums/pp97/Ojoe117/SuperSluggers.png

[tleeart]

That rocks. I hope you can find a good shot of the stadium for the background, at leas on the back. I don't know what you can do on the front. Probably just keep the simplicity going there.

Keep it up, this one looks really tight so far.

[ojoe2000]

I couldn't find any good quality pictures of the stadium so I made my own background. It took forever to place and rotate all the baseballs. Should it stay or go?

http://i401.photobucket.com/albums/pp97/Ojoe117/SuperSluggers-1.png

[CengizMan]

The green is a bit too 'shining', try to make it look more 'relaxed'.

[ojoe2000]

I've changed the back and the green on the front of the box. Please tell me what you think.


http://i401.photobucket.com/albums/pp97/Ojoe117/SuperSluggers-2.png

[GrahamZ]

i dont like th scan lines and make mario more centred as you cant see the end of the bat

and the spine needs changed. the text doesnt fit with the green background.

[ojoe2000]

i dont like th scan lines and make mario more centred as you cant see the end of the bat

and the spine needs changed. the text doesnt fit with the green background.

ok, cool I'll try that tomorrow

[jesse777]

Get rid of the Rated T logo and the epic phail logo looks good.
Or is this supposed to be satire?

[Cerium]

I actually liked the first version when it was a satire! I found it quite funny.

[Skyrunner]

Yeah it was funny, but the latest version ROCKS, I love it.

[Shadow the Hedgehog]

Diddy's feet look reeeeeaaaallly creepy.

[ojoe2000]

I'm not postung a picture this time. I tried what GrahamZ said but I liked my version better. Also I'm thinking of keeping my original description as well, but I'm not sure if it should be submitted as humor or unofficial. Seeing as the only jokes are the epic fail logo and the description.

[ojoe2000]

Forget what I said about keeping the description I just got an idea for a new box. Involving a simular description.

[tleeart]

I'd bring back that render of Peach on the new version, I think that had some nice appeal to it, I'm glad you got rid of Diddy though, his feet do look bizarre.

[ojoe2000]

I'm stuck on the back I can't find a good font to use I or were to put the text and what colour it should be. Someone please suggest something.

[ojoe2000]

Its been quite some time since I've worked on this, I simply haven't had the time. Anyway as always please tell me what you think, what I should change/improve, ect.

c/cc welcome.

http://i401.photobucket.com/albums/pp97/Ojoe117/SuperSluggers-3.png

[tleeart]

You spelled color "colour" on the back. I know that's correct spelling to Brit's/Aussie's and pretty much any English speaker outside the U.S, but you have ESRB there, so I'm guessing it's American.

[ojoe2000]

You spelled color "colour" on the back. I know that's correct spelling to Brit's/Aussie's and pretty much any English speaker outside the U.S, but you have ESRB there, so I'm guessing it's American.

Oh I'll change the esrb.

[tleeart]

Oh I'll change the esrb.

That works. It doesn't exactly deliver the lolz, but it looks decent.

[GrahamZ]

ahha you did this ageeeees ago lol

maybe change the spine colour to white? or something.

and bowsers bat covers to much of the screenshot!

this is very good though :)

[ojoe2000]

I changed the ratings, moved bowser down a bit and changed the description and epic fail logo. I'm thinking of submitting this soon if no one else has any suggestions.
EDIT: I also changed the spine.

c/cc welcome.

http://i401.photobucket.com/albums/pp97/Ojoe117/SuperSluggers-4.png

[Jbone]

Don't like the tagline font, but it's good enough to submit I say.

[ojoe2000]

I probally going to submit this later today unless someone else suggests something.

http://i401.photobucket.com/albums/pp97/Ojoe117/SuperSluggers-5.png

[Outcast of Redemption]

I suggest that you give the letters an outline on the back of your box. It makes them stand out more, in some sort of way.
I also suggest that you actually put a rating on it, such as an ESRB or PEGI logo.

[ClonedX]

Take off the scanlines on the front. It doesnt fit in the game, also the BG above "Batter Up" is extremely blurry and the tagline is a little choppy.


Still its great. Nice job :) Fix those stuff and i will definately fav it =D

[ojoe2000]

I suggest that you give the letters an outline on the back of your box. It makes them stand out more, in some sort of way.
I also suggest that you actually put a rating on it, such as an ESRB or PEGI logo.

There is a rating on it... seriously wtf? Anyway I'll see what the outlines look like.

[ojoe2000]

Take off the scanlines on the front. It doesnt fit in the game, also the BG above "Batter Up" is extremely blurry and the tagline is a little choppy.


Still its great. Nice job :) Fix those stuff and i will definately fav it =D

I'll fix the tagline and background, but I'm not sure about the scan lines I like the way they look.

[GrahamZ]

this is looking really gooood but the spine doesnt look right try white text :D

[ojoe2000]

Finished - http://www.vgboxart.com/view/24683/mario.super.sluggers/?replies=1